{"id":3502,"date":"2016-05-20T11:44:20","date_gmt":"2016-05-20T18:44:20","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/GXL\/?p=3502"},"modified":"2016-10-25T19:50:07","modified_gmt":"2016-10-26T02:50:07","slug":"the-real-danish-summer","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/alteritas.net\/GXL\/?p=3502","title":{"rendered":"The Real Danish Summer"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">Early August is not my favorite time to travel on the continent, but that is how things have worked out. Apart from Saarbr\u00fccken and Vienna, old stomping grounds, we\u2019ll spend a week in Copenhagen. As is my wont when I travel to new places, I\u2019ve taken up Danish. As Humpty-Dumpty said, I mean that what I want it to mean.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">I&#8217;ve no illusions about what a few months of desultory study will achieve, though probably more will be than thirty years ago, since now I have the help of\u00a0 the web. Back then there were not even Post-It flags. You actually had to remember how to find something you had once read.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">Technological change is a mixed bag.\u00a0 The social media have mind-numbing and no doubt obesity-producing effects on the gammas, deltas and epsilons of our brave new world. The alphas, that notorious one percent, will continue to reap bounteous wealth therefrom. That&#8217;s the way the law&#8217;s been writ.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">A beta, e.g.\u00a0my humble self, nonetheless\u00a0has much to gain, though not much lucrative.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">Several weeks ago I published <a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/GXL\/?p=3480\">a translation from Osip Mandelstam<\/a> based on a yellowing typescript bearing fading handwritten notations from a Russian friend who shared my sense of poetry. The Danish translations below are instead spin-offs of the internet, its host of search engines and language apps. <\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">The Canadian poet <a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/D._G._Jones\">Doug Jones<\/a>, who passed a few months ago, was a friend and a mentor. I think often of his observation that we are more inclined to like a poem by someone we know than someone we don\u2019t. I have no notion about <a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Henrik_Nordbrandt\">Henrik Nordbrandt<\/a> I haven\u2019t extracted from the web. Yet I feel I know both him and the\u00a0older but roughly contemporary Swedish\u00a0poet\u00a0<a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Tomas_Transtr\u00f6mer\">Tomas Transtr\u00f6mer<\/a>. The second Nordbrandt version below evokes in my mind the two poems by Transtr\u00f6mer which I have so far translated (<a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/facsimiles\/transtromer-beheld\/\">Fr\u00e5n juli 90<\/a> and <a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/facsimiles\/2449-2\/\">Sp\u00e5r<\/a>).\u00a0How artificial is this intelligence? Not for me to say. I am inside this box and so cannot run a <a href=\"https:\/\/en.wikipedia.org\/wiki\/Turing_test\">Turing test<\/a>\u00a0on its output.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">There is a subtext in Nordbrandt&#8217;s\u00a0<i>Den rigtige dan<\/i><em>sk sommer<\/em>, one signaled by his\u00a0choice of the definite as opposed to the indefinite article in the\u00a0title and reflected in my own: <em>den rigtige<\/em>, not <em>en rigtig <\/em>Danish summer, <u>the<\/u> real not <u>a<\/u> real (he does have the latter in the body of his text, where the context is different). Nordbrandt on occasion criticized the notion of <a href=\"http:\/\/www.gr\u00e6nsen.dk\/content\/henrik-nordbrandt-danskhed-i-sig-selv-er-ingenting\">danskhed<\/a> (Danish-ness) as a potentially totalizing construction of Danish identity. To my mind, though, he\u00a0is after even bigger game. At stake is the concept of \u201cness-ness\u201d, the seduction, to which we are deeply susceptible, of believing abstractions mean what they appear to say, at least as compared with the chaotic glut of sensual experience, the tumult of psychic life, the pell-mell tumble of language. This dimension of Nordbrandt&#8217;s work is reflected in\u00a0the standard translation by Thom Satterlee, who chose to refer to &#8220;summerness&#8221; rather than just &#8220;summer&#8221; in his <a href=\"http:\/\/www.poetryinternationalweb.net\/pi\/site\/poem\/item\/16683\">otherwise carefully literal translation<\/a>.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">These versions from the Danish belong in a batch\u00a0with some of my others by the Portuguese Fernando Pessoa and the Catalan Gabriel Ferrater. See, for example, <a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/facsimiles\/the-strangest-of-all\/\">The Strangest of All\u00a0<\/a>or <a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/facsimiles\/icons\/\">Icons<\/a>, themselves akin to my \u201cphenomenological\u201d poems linked here.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<ul>\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/pastis\/tethering-for-davo\/\">Tethering \u2014 For Davo<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/pastis\/shinny\/\">Shinny<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/pastis\/iris\/\">Iris<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/pastis\/beauty-sleep\/\">Beauty Sleep<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/stoic-garden\/\">Stoic Garden<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/pastis\/beauty-is-the-memory-of-the-flesh\/\">Beauty is the Memory of the Flesh<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/pastis\/making-nothing-happen\/\">Making Nothing Happen<\/a><\/li>\n<li><a href=\"http:\/\/alteritas.net\/pastis\/the-skin-of-things\/insomnia-at-forty-below\/\">Insomnia at Forty Below<\/a><\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Most are also, like <i>Den rigtige dansk somme<\/i>r, unrhymed or \u201cmute&#8221; sonnets.<\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">All of this might sound pedantic. Maybe it is, but what I am really wondering about as I write\u00a0is what the weather will be in Copenhagen the second week of August.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">***<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><b>The Real Danish Summer<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">The real Danish summer will be what this sonnet\u00a0<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">is about, since whatever surrounds us should fit<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">into not thirteen or fifteen but fourteen verses,\u00a0<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">everything in its proper place, form and content fused,<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">just as I am myself at one with this summer day,<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">itself at one with Danishness. Well and perfectly true,<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">except this poem wouldn&#8217;t be itself if it didn&#8217;t\u00a0<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">point out that nothing can be one with anything else.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">There must be spaces between. Still Danish summer\u00a0<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">is when and where I could best do without myself.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">I would have let nature speak in simile\u00a0on my behalf<br \/>\n<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">had not<\/span>\u00a0that mown <span style=\"color: #000000;\">lawn\u2019s likely words made it risky.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">There is a tall, red chimney, the crematorium&#8217;s.<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">What solace to be at long last free of oneself!<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><b>After the Danish of Henrik Nordbrandt,<br \/>\n<i>Den rigtige dansk sommer<\/i> (<a href=\"http:\/\/www.poetryinternationalweb.net\/pi\/site\/poem\/item\/16683\">literal translation<\/a>)<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><i>En rigtig dansk sommer skal v\u00e6re temaet for denne sonnet:<br \/>\n<\/i><i>For det m\u00e5 da v\u00e6re rigtigt at det, som omgiver en, ikke skal siges<br \/>\n<\/i><i>i tretten eller femten linier, men i fjorten: S\u00e5dan vil jeg mene<br \/>\n<\/i><i>alting kommer p\u00e5 sin plads, s\u00e5 form og indhold bliver \u00e9t<br \/>\n<\/i><i>s\u00e5dan som jeg selv er \u00e9t med sommeren<br \/>\n<\/i><i>som er \u00e9t med danskheden<br \/>\n<\/i><i>der er det helt rigtige: Men det ville ikke v\u00e6re dette digt<br \/>\n<\/i><i>hvis det ikke p\u00e5pegede, at ingen kan v\u00e6re \u00e9t med noget andet.<br \/>\n<\/i><i>Plads skal der v\u00e6re: En rigtig dansk sommer<br \/>\n<\/i><i>er nok der hvor jeg bedst kunne undv\u00e6re mig selv.<br \/>\n<\/i><i>Og jeg lod gerne naturen tale p\u00e5 mine vegne, om ikke det vulg\u00e6re<br \/>\n<\/i><i>gr\u00f8nne havde gjort det for pinligt:<br \/>\n<\/i><i>Midt i det st\u00e5r en h\u00f8j r\u00f8d skorsten: Den h\u00f8rer til krematoriet.<br \/>\n<\/i><i>Hvilken tr\u00f8st langt om l\u00e6nge at blive fri for sig selv!<\/i><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><b>Distraught Dream<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">A burst of dust obscured the sun,<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">spilled down the mountain slopes<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">to my love<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">and her lover\u2019s<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">winter lair.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">A footbridge swayed under<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">my steps as I stumbled\u00a0<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">on without direction.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">Just as far over that span<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">have I come as since childhood,<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">so death will be met in its place\u00a0<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">somewhere between me now<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">and those gray shafts on the opposite shore.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\">(This all lasted less than an instant\u00a0<\/span><br \/>\n<span style=\"color: #000000;\">\u2013 what rests of being.)<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><b>After the Danish of Henrik Nordbrandt,<br \/>\n<i>Dr\u00f8m om fortvivlelse <\/i>(<a href=\"http:\/\/www.poetryinternationalweb.net\/pi\/site\/poem\/item\/564\">literal translation<\/a>)<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><i>En st\u00f8vet sky gik for solen<br \/>\nog lagde bjergsiden ned<br \/>\ntil et vinterleje<br \/>\nfor min elskede<br \/>\nog hendes elsker.<\/i><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><i>En bro gungrede under mine f\u00f8dder<br \/>\nmen mine skridt<br \/>\nhavde ingen retning.<\/i><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><i>Der var lige s\u00e5 langt over broen<br \/>\nsom jeg var kommet fra min barndom.<\/i><\/span><\/p>\n<p><span style=\"color: #000000;\"><i>S\u00e5 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