Still Life en Plein Air

As they thrash in the breeze the maples moan.
One that I know stands not quite alone

on a slope where gloom and silence cloak
a footpath running beside an ancient oak.

From its broad boughs splashes of scarlet flow
to the fresh sound of water burbling below.

An open slash in the limbs makes a frame
through which a beam pierces, igniting a flame.

The fabric of its swaying summit seems spun
from the dying fires of the crimson sun.

Among golden leaves below in a bed
there is one which flashes bright blood-red.

Twilight then mutes the luster of things, throws
ambient shadows shading to rose.

The blue-white moon heaves into sight,
spills trickles of silver into vast, pure night,

transparent splendor nothing can rival:
after setting sun, night autumnal.

***

Last week I flew into Ottawa for the first time in almost five years. It was late afternoon and the sun had slipped behind a veil of cirrus off to the west. As the little Embraer cut a slow arc east, there was a splendid view of the confluence of the Rideau River and, on the opposite shore in Québec, the Gatineau, both emptying into the Ottawa itself, once the main conduit for the canoe-driven fur trade from Montreal to the Upper Country, indeed across the entire continent. It was a week too early for most leaves to turn, but a few trees were touched with scarlet. For me, these sere tokens of memory were enough to evoke realms of blazing experience left far behind, though the season’s full radiance was yet to come.

The Canadian poet Albert Lozeau (1878-1924) lived a life too short and painful to have rivalled the great Émile Nelligan (1879-1941), who has been often likened to Arthur Rimbaud, and who bore sufferings of his own. I was delighted in 1987 when the Sherbrooke-based poetry review Ellipse asked me to translate two of his poems. The first, above, was renewing itself in my mind as the plane touched down.

The French text / On translation. Earlier version published in Ellipse 38 (1987), 113-114.

Spleen

Must I find my body in a book,
a misnomered bruise, borne like a gland
on the wrong side since they made me
cross over and out? When I was a girl,
the lithe babble of warm rain fell
through my skin, herbs from the languorous
green mountains wafted through my pores.
No one made the flowers speak. The sea
was blue, gulls’ flight script I could read.

Now through metal blinds I watch the cold
precipitate particles of light
from the gray – or is it grey? – veil
late solstice afternoon unfurls:
words which do not become me.

***

Nasrin was born on the southern shores of the Caspian. Winters in Alberta were far from her cup of tea. To make matters worse, when I wrote this poem for her, she was suffering from a debilitating virus. “Spleen” to her had always been Baudelairean melancholy, not the gland, the exact location of which required some research, though both meanings certainly applied in that place and at that point in time. She recovered completely and fifteen years later we have found ourselves in lotusland, not where Canadians place it, in Vancouver, but much farther south.